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Introduction
The last year of my life was far more fun and healthy than the previous one and that was all because of the Activity Leisure Club.
Positive aspects
People go to the club every afternoon because not only do they get to spend time with multiple of their friends but they also get to be healthier and more fit. This Club alows the members to play sports everyday and if anyone feels tired they can go relax in the pool.
Negatve aspects
The only problems I can see in this club are the conditions of the futball fields and of the workout devices. Ths grass on the futball field has a lot of dents which ruins the way the ball can roll on the smooth surface and the nets of the goals are getting teard up. The problem with the work out utencils or devices is the hygiene, cleaning it twice a week is not the best conditions.
Suggestions
So personally, I would first of all fix the grass of the futball pitch and then add more people working on the cleaning of the center. The expirience is already amazing but adding these things would be perfect.
Good report, MAtu!
Great organization. Remember reports are formal, so be very careful to write formally.
CHeck out these words (spelling, I mean)
allows
football
utensils
A couple of extra corrections:
DO not repeat words– healthy – healthier- remember to use varied vocabulary.
Do we say “more fun” or “funnier”?
THe nets are getting TORN UP.
Good job!