Lesson 17: Writing an Email

Practice

A. Write an email in reply to this one. Use 35-45 words. Write in the comments section.

Hi Jacob!

Hope you are doing well. It´s my birthday next Monday. Would you like to come home for a film, popcorn and chocolate cake? Mary and Joe will be here. It will be fun!

Let me know,

Hans

B. Write an email in reply to this one. Use 35-45 words. Write in the comments section.

Dear Mr. Brown,

I saw your advertisement about a video games competition. I would like to participate but I would like to know when and where it will take place. I would like to know how much I need to pay to take part in it.

Thank you in advance for this information.

Yours sincerely,

Emma Thompson

16 comentarios

1 Hi Hans.
I will go to your birthday. Thanks for the invitation. Now Im going to buy a gift for you.
But, I dont like the chocolate cake because I’m allergic.
So I don’t eat it.
What tipe of popcorn is?
Bye bye.
Jacob.
2 Dear Miss Thompson.
Thanks to connect us, ok, but I need your password and it cost 9,99$
It will be near the camp.
And It will be at 5 o’clock.
Please tell me all these imformation.
See you there.
Mr Brown

Geraldine Crapa Wright (Administrador) 30 de septiembre de 2023 a las 11:44

MARIO, YOU ARE WORKING HARD.
I CAN`T UNDERSTAND THE SECOND EMAIL, DO YOU THINK YOU CAN CHANGE IT A BIT?

Hello Hans,
Hope you are doing well too. Yes of course! Sounds good! I don’t know who are Mary and Joe, but I’m exiting for to know them! It will be fun.
So, I say yes!
See you next Monday,

Jacob

Dear Mrs. Thompson,
Thank you for connect you with us. In this moment I search all the information for you.
Please tell me if you have more questions, and how can I help you.

Yours sincerely,

Mr. Brown

Geraldine Crapa Wright (Administrador) 30 de septiembre de 2023 a las 12:06

Good job, well done.
In email 1, cuando algo que es futuro nos emociona usamos esta frase que es genial.
LOOKING FORWARD TO + ING
I’m looking forward to meeting Mary and Joe. (Estoy emocionada de conocer a Mary y Joe – Estoy deseando conocer a Mary y Joe – ESA es la idea.)

1)
Hi, hello Hans!
I’m fine. How are you?
Yes, of course! I’d love to go and I like a lot de chocolate cake.
Mary and Joe will be there? I can’t wait to see them!
Love,
Jacob.

2)
Dear Miss Thompson,
Than you for your email.
The event will take placeos May 20 at 5:00 p.m in room 5 of the Gran Vía Shopping Center, in Madrid.
The cost is €50 for person.
Your sincerely,
John Brown

Maria Eugenia Vallejo 22 de enero de 2023 a las 15:43

Hi Hans!

of course! I would like go to your birthday. I like the popcorn and chocolate cake is my favourite dessert.
See you the next Monday in your house.

Jacob

Dear Emma Thompsom

Thanks for you email. The competion is in the center of city in Málaga, the next to the mall vialia. And the cost it’s 50€ . For more information call to 663-987-654.

We wait your answer.
Yours sincerely,

Mr Brown

A)-
Hi Hans!
Of course, I go to your birthday. What would you like me to bring?.
See you.

B)- Dear Emma Thompson.
Thanks for email. The competition is near the centre of Central Park. It is not cost much , it is 100 US.
We wait your answer.
Yours sincerely.
Mr. Brown.

Geraldine Crapa Wright (Administrador) 7 de enero de 2022 a las 18:31

Bien Ana!
En el segundo email, recordá siempre poner “Thanks for your email”
El verbo costar nunca va con “to be”. It costs 10 dollars. It doesn´t cost much.
Y una última pequeñita corrección. El verbo “WAIT” para esperar siempre va seguido de FOR. We are waiting for Mary.
Cuando le decimos a alguien que esperamos su respuesta podés usar esta frase, que está buenísima-
Looking forward to your answer. (Espero tu respuesta)
Si es en un ámbito formal hay que agregarle I am. — I am looking forward to your answer.

Hello hans,
I hope that everything with you…is really great…
For sure…please count to me!!!! If you want i can buy some beverages!!!! Let me know…
Only I would like to confirm your address, because I was lost last time…Lmao!!!!
Regards to your parents please!!!!
See you soon friend…..
Chau….

Geraldine Crapa Wright (Administrador) 16 de diciembre de 2021 a las 14:12

Good!
Some little corrections:
Count on me…
Cuando decimos “I” siempre va con mayúscula.

Dear Emma Thompsom
The place,to participe the competion about video games it’s on the center, of Pizarra and it doesn’t cost much : it’s 23€ . I wish you good luck
Yours sincerely
Mr Brown
Es corecto no??????

Ahora está mejor!
Solamente corregir que decimos the place is in the center of Pizarra.

Dear Emma Thompson
The place to participe the competion about the video games. It’s in the center on village Pizarra and it not cost much : its 23 € Okey good luck in competion
Yours sincerely
Mr . Brown

Geraldine Crapa Wright (Administrador) 5 de julio de 2021 a las 14:35

I am happy you are working hard!!!
1. Recuerda la puntuación: Faltan algunas comas, ¿Dónde las pondrías?
2. Hay un “Punto” que no va, ¿Cuál es?
3. ¿Es correcto decir…”it´s in the center on village Pizarra”? ¿Cómo lo podrías decir diferente?
4. It not cost much… se dice it doesn´t cost much.
5. Este tipo de email es formal… ¿Cómo podrías decir “OK, good luck” de otra manera más formal?

Escríbelo nuevamente aquí debajo y haz los cambios necesarios.

A
Hi Jacob
Next monday I bussy I don’t go for your birthday sorry; but I not busy in Thursday! we can go to make something and have fun .Okey I go to work goodbye Jacob.
Hans

Geraldine Crapa Wright (Administrador) 5 de julio de 2021 a las 14:36

This is informal, good!
Next MOnday I´m busy (no te olvides el “AM”)

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